The entrance; inviting, quiet, safe, hidden. My body; begging, needing, wanting, not stopping. Shoved against the wall; gasping, trembling, anticipating, barely breathing. First exchange; excruciating, tantalizing, exquisite, beyond maddening. Every curve felt; blending, grinding, pressing, moaning. Lips pressed together; greedy, exciting, rushed, igniting. Hands unrelenting; groping, exploring, touching, learning. Fevered frenzy; painful, terrifying, urgent, longing. Fist in my hair; pulling, commanding, gentle, demanding. Zipper opens; gripping, stroking, thickness, tasting. Fingers discover; probing, rubbing, finding, plunging. Almost beyond control; can’t, won’t, shouldn’t, have to. Something lost; given, surrendered, sacrificed, unnoticed. My mind, my body, my soul, my earring.
© Copyright 2013 Nina D’Arcangela. All Rights Reserved.
Nina D'Arcangela
Sotet Angyal 
July 29th, 2013 at 10:59 am
Nina, I absolutely love your style. This piece is phenomenal. Very clever and well-done.
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July 29th, 2013 at 3:25 pm
Thank you, Jaimie! A little less ‘wordy’ than usual for me, but packed with words… if that makes sense. 😉
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July 29th, 2013 at 9:16 pm
The cadence and movement created by your words was wonderful. I also love the surprise ending. It was perfect.
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July 29th, 2013 at 9:39 pm
Thank you, Jerry! I’m very happy you enjoyed it. The ending… that was a surprise, even to me 😉
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July 30th, 2013 at 1:19 pm
You really do write poetry – yep you nailed Lust, right down to the earing which cracked me up
(I just posted something on vampire jokes..not sure it worked)
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July 30th, 2013 at 1:22 pm
Thanks, Sue! I’m not sure I’d call it poetry… maybe muddled prose??? lol
I’ll have to check out your Vampire piece, I didn’t get a notification for some reason …hmmm, have to look into that!
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July 30th, 2013 at 1:36 pm
it just went live a little while ago. I know with blogger it takes a while for notification but we’re both on wp
never would I call your prose muddled 😀
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July 31st, 2013 at 9:36 am
Wow, such a beautiful slice of prose, Nina!! Are you growing soft on us, your dark followers? 😛 lol
Reading this made me feel needy for passion; the heat alone coming from your words was palpable. You wrote it very simply yet conveyed such a wealth of…well, lust! lol
You never cease to amaze me ;}
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August 11th, 2013 at 4:44 pm
Thank you, Joe! Yup – this one was about the title, and the title alone! LOL No fancy terms, or woven sentences, just words that describe a scene and (hopefully) provoke a response. ;}
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August 9th, 2013 at 7:12 am
Moving. Powerful. Unforgettable.
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August 9th, 2013 at 2:11 pm
Thank you! 🙂
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August 27th, 2013 at 1:05 pm
So much passion. I live how words are running after each other and create this emotional roller-coaster of a beautiful writing.
Brilliant.
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August 27th, 2013 at 2:59 pm
Thank you, Chatty Owl, for stopping by and for your kindness! This one is exactly what you described it to be – a roller-coaster of emotions painting a picture with words. 🙂
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August 30th, 2013 at 11:49 am
ah Nina a sensuous tidbit to keep us longing for more …
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August 30th, 2013 at 6:25 pm
Bury me when I no longer long for more! LOL – Thanks, Leslie! 🙂
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September 14th, 2013 at 5:20 am
Dontcha just hate when you lose an earring like that? I mean, after all the good sex, then the missing earring just sort of changes the mood. 🙂
Wonderful piece of writing! I had to read it out loud — it begs to be lifted off the page.
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September 15th, 2013 at 6:55 pm
Yeah… a lost earring will ruin great sex every time! LOL
Thank you very much for the comment and compliment, John! I truly appreciate it 🙂
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