The Mission: Pick two of the five words and write a 100 – 150 word flash piece incorporating them. Here is mine.
Bloater
Menthol, that’s all I smelled. The bloated mass before me waited patiently. I picked up the scalpel, the fluorescent light humming above glinted off its metallic surface. The Y incision made, I peeled back the outer layer of skin exposing globules of fatty residue and further decomposed tissue. Thick yellow fluid oozed from the gangrenous edges of the incised flesh. The second stroke sliced through muscle, invaded the stomach cavity; the gaseous release hissed in competition with the fixture overhead. The half-digested, half-rotted contents within were easily discernible. Next, I moved to the throat and began a vertical slit in the esophagus. The small, elongated objects lodged in the upper esophageal sphincter left no doubt; they were human fingers. Removing my mask, I glanced at the chart, confirmed the preliminary findings.
Cause of Death: suffocation due to blockage of the systema respiratorium.
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December 5th, 2016 at 9:50 am
Love this, Nina!!!! 🙂
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December 5th, 2016 at 11:43 am
Thanks, Joe!! 🙂
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December 8th, 2016 at 7:13 am
Eeeww!
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December 9th, 2016 at 10:45 am
Exactly the desired effect. 😉
Thank you for stopping by the blog and reading my flash piece, Jadi! 🙂
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December 30th, 2016 at 11:50 am
This was clinical yet chilling as hell!
Masterfully spun, Nina.
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December 30th, 2016 at 12:00 pm
Thank you, Hook! It was meant to be cold and detached, yet make the reader feel mildly uncomfortable. Thanks for stopping by to have a read! Happy New Year! 🙂
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