{This post is of an adult nature – NOT for children}

Kneel. Don’t question with your eyes! Do what I say immediately. I’ll not have a fool for a slave. Others beg for the privilege you’re experiencing. Something about that statement amuses you? Clearly you have no idea what it means to submit. Ah – No! There will be no safe words today; you don’t get to call Uncle on me that quickly. I’ve not had the chance to exploit your fear… not yet. I know, you came here with the misunderstanding that there would be rules – there are, just not yours! You thought your two hundred dollars was buying you an hour of your own pleasure; but you should have read the fine print. This hour is all mine to do with as I see fit. That makes you nervous? Don’t try to mask your eyes, you can’t hide from me, and no one is coming to save you, dumpling.

She casually strolls to the table  and picks up the riding crop.

Good. Now I see genuine fear in those gleaming blue orbs of yours. What shall we do first? What was that? Did you say something? You’re mumbling, I don’t like mumbling! Speak up!

The resounding crack of the crop is heard.

Did that hurt? I’m sorry, that was completely unexpected – by you. Are you trying to tell me something? Are you already whimpering about my striking you? Is that a yes or a no?

The echo of the crack once again rebounds across the chamber.

Now, have we learned our lesson? A nod will do. Good, I expected as much. Let’s take a look at your list of fantasies and pick one I’d like to exploit, shall we? Yes, I think we shall.

Her arm raises, he flinches, his mouth slams shuts with a snap.

Don’t make me strike you out of turn again, it makes me feel cheated. You don’t want that, do you? No, I didn’t think so. See, you’re learning already, you knew enough to nod and not speak.

Smiling sweetly, she strikes. This crack the loudest yet.

I do so like to reward good behavior, now what does it say here about you not liking C&B torture…


As the session ends, she removes the bit gag from his mouth and helps him to his feet.

“Oh, Tommy! You added in an extra hundred. That’s so sweet of you!”

Working his jaw to loosen the muscles, he replies “I’ve gotta keep my special girl happy. Same time next week?”

“I’ll pencil you in!” she beams with a bright smile and, stretching up onto her tippy-toes gently kisses his cheek as he is about to leave the room.

© Copyright 2013 Nina D’Arcangela. All Rights Reserved.

I’m doing the 2013 Blogging from A to Z Challenge! Pop back everyday but Sunday through the month of April for a new letter prompt to spawn my deranged ramblings! ;}

About Nina D'Arcangela

Nina D’Arcangela is a quirky horror writer who likes to spin soul rending snippets of despair. She reads anything from splatter matter to dark matter. She's an UrbEx adventurer who suffers from unquenchable wanderlust. She loves to photograph abandoned places, bits of decay and old grave yards. Nina is a co-owner of Sirens Call Publications, a co-founder of the horror writer's group 'Pen of the Damned', founder and administrator of the Ladies of Horror Picture-prompt Monthly Writing Challenge, and if that isn't enough, put a check mark in the box next to owner and resident nut-job of Dark Angel Photography. View all posts by Nina D'Arcangela

13 responses to “Slave

  • 35andupcynicismonhold

    hahaha, you should have put the notice/warning in the earlier posts, too, my dear. too late now, your writings have already corrupted the corruptible parts of us, lol. another swell fiction, what the… 😉


  • Joseph Pinto

    Another great slice of your sick, depraved (and might I also say brilliant) mind 🙂 Reading all your entries thus far for A-Z, your arsenal of prose is on full display; you are not a one trick pony by any means! lol I appreciate how you change your ‘voice’ piece to piece & embrace it as you do. Well done!


    • Nina D'Arcangela

      Thank you, Joe! Yes, a peek at the grey matter can be a sick and depraved experience to say the least! I’m glad you’re enjoying my otherness; I usually offer up my dark prose and hide away the rest. Things are sometimes not-so-horrible here too! LOL 😉


  • moondustwriter

    reminiscent of another piece you did with slaves and whips
    like the voice in this one
    tally ho…


  • gloria367

    Slaves, whips and submission, oh my. I enjoyed this piece from the darker side of life.


  • zkullis

    I’ve realized, much to my dismay, that I haven’t been getting the email notices to your new posts. Damn it!! Now, on to the story. I’m trying to decide if I’ll be a submissive or the dominant in this response. 😉

    Dark and delicious. This was great, although I found myself wondering about the excluded scenes. I’ve known a few Dominants and, for the most part, you never would have guessed it. You perfectly captured the duplicity of their lives and their sexual roles.


    • Nina D'Arcangela

      First, what makes you think you have the right to decide? (need I say ‘maggot’ or can we assume it’s implied?)

      Second, as the slave – yes that’s the assigned role – I guess you have a lot of reading to do to catch up, now don’t you? (If you’ve learned anything from this post, you’ll be nodding, not speaking, at this point)

      Dark and delicious is kinda my thing. I’m sure I’ll take a Pen post down this road one day and offer all a glimpse into a world few have had the luxury of experiencing. We’ll talk; actually, I’ll talk, you’ll kneel… ;}

      Thanks for the kind words! Stepping out of char for a moment to smile in appreciation 🙂


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