Plunging the blade deep into the abdominal cavity, I drive it upward until I hit the xiphoid. Twisting slightly to my right, I skirt the sternum and slice through the costal cartilage attaching the ribs to the breast plate. Careful not to puncture the internal organs, I stop my upward motion at the manubrium. Drawing the sharpened metal along the topside of the upper-most rib, I listen to the harsh breathing. Returning to the original point of entry, I pause, then again thrust into and through the abdominal wall, swiftly separating the flesh and muscle from the body’s left side.
Laying the knife on the tray, I reach down and peel the cavity open with a great deal of force. A slight groan escapes amongst the pops and rending sounds as the connective tissue still in place rips away to reveal the fluttering heart. A marvelous thing the human body, a machine designed by the hand of a master; a fragile balance struck with a sadistic keeper.
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April 28th, 2014 at 2:21 am
Yikes! That was intense! I chose “xiphoid” also, but in its “sword-shaped” definition. Great minds think alike, yes?
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April 28th, 2014 at 7:41 pm
Hi Lillian! Intense is good! lol – I need to make it to your blog and pick up from where I left off. I’m sorry it wasn’t in the month of April, but I will get there and read every one. I can’t wait to see what you did with ‘xiphoid’. 😀
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April 28th, 2014 at 9:15 pm
Not to worry, Nina. I know how hectic life can be. I welcome a visit from you whenever you can make it.
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April 28th, 2014 at 8:51 am
Reblogged this on From Bright Minds Come Dark Things and commented:
What a way to start off on a Monday!
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April 28th, 2014 at 7:43 pm
Thank you, Craig! Nothing like a good thoracic cavity invasion to start the week out right! ;-D
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April 28th, 2014 at 1:01 pm
That was intense.
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April 28th, 2014 at 7:44 pm
lol – well, I hope intense is good! Thank you, Fatima! 🙂
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April 28th, 2014 at 3:19 pm
Lucky x letter for you lol
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April 28th, 2014 at 7:48 pm
Happy ‘x’ letter for me; needed to do a bit of venting in a constructive/destructive manner last week when I calmly wrote this! (read ‘calmly’ as ‘raging lunatic’) lol
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April 29th, 2014 at 4:34 pm
Oh…you brought back memories of my anatomy classes….indeed an intense write.
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May 20th, 2014 at 1:20 pm
This reply is coming late, but the comment thrilled me when I first read it! Thank you greatly for this one!! 😀
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April 30th, 2014 at 1:10 pm
*claps paws* Bravo, bravo!! What a sadistic little post; extremely well written. Violent without being perverse. Loved it, Nina 🙂
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May 20th, 2014 at 1:22 pm
LOL – thank you for the paw-claps! I particularly like the clinical detachment this conveys, but you know it’s anything but clinical! ;}
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